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--- a/NEWPROPOSAL/FULLPROP.tex
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@@ -1055,8 +1055,8 @@ specifically target:
   \emph{Ars Technica}, \emph{New Scientist}, \emph{FQXi blog}.
 \item French: \emph{La Recherche}, \emph{Pour la Science}, and
   \emph{Interstices}.
-\item Dutch: \emph{Kijk Magazine}, \emph{Quest}, and the dutch edition
-  of the \emph{New Scientist}.
+\item \bR Dutch: \emph{Kijk Magazine}, \emph{Quest}, and the dutch edition
+  of the \emph{New Scientist}.\e \TODO{replace dutch ones?}
 \end{itemize}
 Several of members of the consortium have had their work featured in
 these publications before.  
@@ -1677,6 +1677,7 @@ Complete deep-\zx compiler stack with open APIs. \\\hline
   \end{tabular}}
 \end{center}
 
+\e
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@@ -1694,7 +1695,7 @@ mitigation measures.\textbf{Please provide a table with critical risks
 The project is overall quite high-risk, in the sense that what we
 propose is in the most part entirely novel, and might fail.  The
 rewards for success would be correspondingly great.  However, we have
-designed the project to survive the failure of may (or even most) of
+designed the project to survive the failure of many (or even most) of
 its tasks and still deliver value.
 
 We mix low and high risk activities.  Success in low
@@ -1702,7 +1703,7 @@ risk activities (\ref{task:trans1}, \ref{task:basic-opt}, \ref{task:ECC},
 %\ref{task:axioms}, THIS IS NOT REAALY LOW RISK
 \ref{task:circuit-model}, \ref{task:mbqc-model})
 will still deliver significant progress towards our overall objective.
-\ref{wp:backends} is the most critical; here we mitigate the risk by
+\ref{wp:theory} is the most critical; here we mitigate the risk by
 (i) developing experience on easier objectives before addressing more
 demanding ones and (ii) consulting our board of advisors to foresee
 problems.  Due to its high dependence on other tasks, we consider
@@ -1718,14 +1719,16 @@ problems.  Due to its high dependence on other tasks, we consider
     & \textbf{Proposed mitigation measures}\\\hline
 %    
 Can't hire suitable post-docs&
-Low&
+Medium&
 All&
-We have already identified several suitable candidates for each role.
+While we have already identified several suitable candidates for each
+role, the investigators also collectively supervise a large body of PhD
+students and post-docs who could be channelled to the project.
 \\\hline
 %    
-NQIT or Delft machine info unavailable or not detailed enough&
+NQIT or Grenoble machine info unavailable or not detailed enough&
 Low&
-\ref{wp:backends}&
+\ref{wp:usefulstuff}&
 (i) We have members of the consortium from NQIT, and letters of
 support from DiCarlo who agrees to help.  (ii) We can approach other
 members of our board of advisors, or other friendly
@@ -1746,14 +1749,13 @@ Medium&
 All&
 (i) We will establish a common API in \ref{del:earlyapi} to allow
 loose coupling of the software components (ii) We appoint the most
-experienced software developers in the  consortium (Allouche,
-Kissinger, Valiron) to act as ``integration triumvirate'' and ensure
+experienced software developer in the  consortium (Valiron) to act as ``integration tzar'' and ensure
 the global design is good. (iii) As noted above, we will integrate
 often and deliver new features more than once a year.  
-    \\\hline
+\\\hline
   \end{tabular}
 \end{center}
-\e
+
 
 \newpage
 \subsection{Consortium as a whole} %\REM{(1 page)}